Monday, April 9, 2012

EXERCISE 3 PART 3


I decided to let one of my friends read my script, and they thought it was good. The only thing they wanted to change is that, they want it to be more exciting, which I agree. They said it was good but it was a little boring. So in my decision I think I’m going try to make it a little bit more exciting. As of myself I could find anything to change because of the location and the activities that took place. I say that because not a lot happens in that particular area. The area I chose is a very calmed and relaxed setting without a lot of activities going on. So in conclusion I’m just going to try to make it more exciting.

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